I'm going to be bold, but your sketch looks so much better than whatever you've done digitally. It's ugly there's nothing to say about it, the lines are all wavy.
The sketch has nice shading, this digital recolour doesn't. It's hard to translate a traditional drawing to digital, so I'd suggest you just keep making more sketches on paper.
i redid the sketch within adobe illustrator, i think it is much more better. thank you for being bold it was nice criticism is much appreciated. i shall post an update and i will do that more
CyberRobotnix
I'm going to be bold, but your sketch looks so much better than whatever you've done digitally. It's ugly there's nothing to say about it, the lines are all wavy.
The sketch has nice shading, this digital recolour doesn't. It's hard to translate a traditional drawing to digital, so I'd suggest you just keep making more sketches on paper.
bungeeworm
i redid the sketch within adobe illustrator, i think it is much more better. thank you for being bold it was nice criticism is much appreciated. i shall post an update and i will do that more